Gunmetal Widow v2.0

Much improved, yes?

Added a little shading, hardened the lines, and shrunk the "hoohahs" down and gave them a different texture.  Will post the final shaded version tomorrow, I wanna go work on other drawings now. Any last words before it's done?

Apparatus Trucido v2.0

Here's a shot of the right and left sides of the picture, stupid scanner can't handle both. I could REALLY use some pointers on how to make brickwork look all... bricky... and still shade it right. same goes for the background people/buildings. ALso, you can tell that's smoke/fog obscuring everything on the bottom of the page, right?

I am REALLY happy with the way the womans' longcoat came out, shading-wise. almost EXACTLY as I envisioned it! 

Apparatus Trucido

Didn't quite have time to finish this one over the weekend, several other drawings I was working on got in the way. This one just needs to be cleaned up a bit and shaded... and have the fog added. I hate shading fog. So much.

Otherwise I'm quite pleased how this one came out, even if it was just a practice in special effects (the lightning generator on the womans' back, shock-stick thing, magic sword, and soon to be fog rolling away form the carcass of her erstwhile opponent) Unfortunately, the scanner I'm using is too narrow to accommodate the entire picture, everything on the right got cut off by almost an inch, BLEARGH! Also, I HATE drawing people n the background, when I have to work so small on something normally so detailed, it always comes out looking weird because I keep trying to put all the normal details on them with a microscope. At least this time the woman in the background came out marginally okay, but I definitely need to improve on that. Ohm and for those of you not familiar with Latin, "Apparatus Trucido" translates literally into "Machine Slayer", which probably would make more sense if you could see the rest of the Ironhearts smashed remains on the RIGHT (stupid ass scanner)

Any comments before I finalize this sucka?