Gunmetal Widow v2.0

Much improved, yes?

Added a little shading, hardened the lines, and shrunk the "hoohahs" down and gave them a different texture.  Will post the final shaded version tomorrow, I wanna go work on other drawings now. Any last words before it's done?

Apparatus Trucido v2.0

Here's a shot of the right and left sides of the picture, stupid scanner can't handle both. I could REALLY use some pointers on how to make brickwork look all... bricky... and still shade it right. same goes for the background people/buildings. ALso, you can tell that's smoke/fog obscuring everything on the bottom of the page, right?

I am REALLY happy with the way the womans' longcoat came out, shading-wise. almost EXACTLY as I envisioned it!