Gunmetal Widow v2.0

Much improved, yes?

Added a little shading, hardened the lines, and shrunk the "hoohahs" down and gave them a different texture.  Will post the final shaded version tomorrow, I wanna go work on other drawings now. Any last words before it's done?

Apparatus Trucido v2.0

Here's a shot of the right and left sides of the picture, stupid scanner can't handle both. I could REALLY use some pointers on how to make brickwork look all... bricky... and still shade it right. same goes for the background people/buildings. ALso, you can tell that's smoke/fog obscuring everything on the bottom of the page, right?

I am REALLY happy with the way the womans' longcoat came out, shading-wise. almost EXACTLY as I envisioned it! 

Got a twofer today, although these two are slightly old material. Both drawings are from the TTRPG I've been working on, although the top one was scrapped because the mans face just looks weird. It may sound egotistical, but I love how both of the arms on the lower picture came out. Still, this shit needs to be EVEN BETTER, so if anyone knows how I shoulda woulda coulda done something different that would have improved the quality, say so!

Fer der EMPRAH

I'm a huge 40k nut. The art and stories are just so hilariously bleak and gothic that franchise never had time to devolve into self-parody, it started OUT that way. And it knows this, which it plays constantly to. I think the term for what it is is "A Universe of HAM", dunno where I heard that term, but it was most likely the internet.

I can't stand the wargame though. Most boring waste of time and money ever. The TTRPGS are great, though, such as Dark Heresy, which the above sketch was originally made for. For some reason, my greedy-ass friends always make me run the games, (Maybe it's because I'M SO GREAT? Yes) The first campaign I wrote for DH (and inevitably scrapped do to horrible balance issues) was... hmm, I forget what I called it, something about a tower of evil built in the middle of some salt flats. Pictured are a Guardsman with a rebreather (They never really tell you what those things look like) on the left, and an Adept in power-armor on the right. There shoul be a gun i the guardsmans hands, but due to space restrictions it now looks like he's either stopping his pal from moving forward or.... yeah, let's just leave it at that last one I said.